Monday, February 11, 2008

Chapter 8 - The Monster

Waterball. Waterball is a fox, but he is blue. He is a boy & he is very nice.
Firecup. Firecup is a girl she is an animal called hotstar she has a fire looking horn & has fire breath.


Mat said that he wanted to leave & go relax on his sofa. "I'll be on my way then, right Waterball?" "Ok," Waterball said. Mat walked away. "Bye," Waterball said, but there was no answer, Mat had walked home already. Waterball walked home slowly. He walked into his house, & there was a monster. It had streaks of red & blue all over it's body & it had a blazing red & blue horn. Firecup was in their bedroom. Waterball had to warn her about the monster. "Firecup don't open the door!" he yelled. Waterball plunged at the monster. The monster fell to the ground. Waterball rushed to their bedroom. He opened the door. Firecup rushed out the door. They started to attack the monster. Then the door of their house flew open. The chief Policeman walked in. "Help us!' Waterball & Firecup yelled. Suddenly tons of policemen ran in. "Get that beast!" yelled the chief. Waterball & Firecup helped get the monster. But it wasn't easy. At last they killed the monster.

2 comments:

Unknown said...

Dear Aidan,
It is exciting for me to be able to read a story on the web that is written by my Grandson.
It's a bonus that the story is good and exciting. Each chapter introduces the reader to a new situation and a new challenge. I feel like I know your mnain characters - Waterball and Firecup. They are resourceful heroes who know how to use their powers (Firecup's fire, for example) and get help when they need it from the police. It is good to know that Waterball and Firecup have a friend, Matt, who is a regular kid. I was surprised to read that Waterball and Firecup had the same dream, but I guess that can happen when people or heroes are really close friends.
It was a relief to read that the monster was eliminated. I look forward to reading more of the adventures of Waterball and Firecup.
love,
Grandma

Tom said...

Don't worry I'll make more. Things just keep getting in the way.